Friday, April 1, 2016

Writing

Those of you who have never tried it may think being a writer is an easy way to make a living. Unfortunately you could not be more wrong.
Let’s start with the basics first, unless you are Stephen King, James Patterson, John Grisham, J.K. Rowling or one of perhaps a couple of dozen others you are not going to make your fortune by writing. In fact you probably won’t make enough to live on and most of the writers I know either have some additional form of income or, like me, do a full time job.
So, nine till five, five days a week you’re working to keep a roof over your family and food on your table but all the time you have this idea for the great American novel going around in your head. You can’t wait to get home, you eat so fast you give yourself heartburn and then you sit down at your laptop, typewriter of word processor ready to begin, but where do you start? You have your idea, you may have your hero, heroine or both pictured in your mind and you may even have an image of the bad guys, if there are any. You know what is going to happen to them but how are you going to get them from the first word to the moment you write “the end”?
Well, if you want to do it properly you close your laptop, pick up a pencil and notepad and start to make notes.
Your notes should be concise, they should cover all aspects of your characters and you should add to them constantly, after all, you may be eighty thousand words into your story and the next chapter could depend on whether Aunt Matilda’s eyes are blue or brown but you can’t remember. Where did you mention it? Chapter four? Maybe chapter sixteen, or did you forget to mention it at all? This is where your notes come in.
Okay, now you’ve written pencil sketches of your major characters and are ready to start – or are you?  Say your hero is a soldier, a historical figure, a spy or maybe an overworked detective. He or she is going to need some place to work from, some equipment, maybe a weapon for disposing of bad guys, some form of transport, even historical transport if your novel is set in the past, something to wear and many other things. If you are lucky and you are following the old adage about writing about what you know, then some of this information will already be available to you but not all of it.
So this is where you start your research and believe me you need to do it. Your potential readers out there are smart people, some of them are already going to know the things you need to look up and, if you get them wrong, they will tell you, perhaps in a review on Amazon and that can be deadly for book sales.
Not so many years ago researching this stuff  meant taking a trip to the local library and browsing through an infinity of books to try to find some obscure fact. You may need to know if Iroquois war axes were double or single headed or, like I did for one of my novels, the height of an F16’s cockpit above the ground. Luckily today we have the internet and details like this are readily available. Google, Bing and Wikipedia are the writer’s friend when it comes to garnering facts but be careful, they can be too friendly and may lure you into spending precious writing time following ever more tangled webs of knowledge.
Speaking of time, you now have your notes, you have as many facts as you think you may need and you are now ready to start writing. You will need many more facts before you are done but you’ve been at this for a while now and you still haven’t written a word so you start.
An average novel is more than 80,000 words and takes a while to complete. I like to aim to write an average of a thousand words a day. Sometimes I do three times that, sometimes only a small portion, but I try to write every day. I also have a system where I start each day’s writing by reading what I wrote the day before, I find it gets me back into the rhythm of the story and it helps with later editing because you can catch errors as you read.
You’re writing 1000 words a day, in a week you will have a first chapter but is it any good? I guess I am lucky, my wife is a talented writer and a dedicated proofreader who wields a mighty red pen. She helps me tremendously with the tedious job of editing. Usually though there is only so much “Is this any good?” that spouses can take and they also tend to be too kind, they want to encourage you so they aren’t as critical as a stranger might be.
What you need is a peer group who will support, encourage and help you while pointing out holes in the plot you may have missed and offering suggestions to aid you in your task.

I’m very lucky, we have two excellent writing support groups near where I live, one for novels and the other for short stories and poems. I have been to both groups and would encourage any one else who feels the urge to write to try similar groups. At the very least you’ll get the encouragement of knowing you are not alone.